Duelling with the commando
An old dusty shed where the Gunzerkers hideout is. When the mighty and powerful gunzerker saw the commando he duelled with the commando.The commandos eyes filled with tears because he lost the duel with the gunzerker.When they finished the duel... the team went to face the mighty blue WHEN THEY GOT TO BLUE THE GUNZERKER USED THE ELECTRIC SHOTGUN TO SHOOT THE blue Crystalisk LEGs. AFTER THEY KILLED blue. WHEN HE FELL DOWN THEY SAW A CHEST. " THERE'S GUNS IN THE CHEST...." exclaimed
To be continued
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You have made a good attempt at writing an opening for your action story. Ka pai James you have included some adjectives. Your next focus needs to be on adding some similies. I can't wait to find out what might happen with all those guns in the chest.
ReplyDeleteIs this the story when me and you was playing Borderlands two if it is LOL good one but I already know what's going to happen next hahaha.
ReplyDeleteGood story James Is blue the Giant monster.You described the shed good.You described the Gunzerker using interesting words.
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